Needs some work.
I like the concept and the composition is interesting, but you need to work on your colors and rendering.
The hero is just an amorphous color blob that only hints at details but contains none. A background of some sort would be nice as well.
Keep at it.
Thanks for the feedback :)
Actually I didn't put almost any details because I was going for an abstract and macabre look. I hope you understand what I mean .
Thanks again for the fast feedback :)
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Clean linework. Great colors. Interesting characters.
Veeery very nice.
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